smile more often
said he
a stranger
in distant place
such pessimism
such negativity
will you live
life like so
ironic
never had he
seen her smile
never would
twitching seemingly
poised to crack
severe features
remain unexplored
another time
some other place
so radiant
blinding
essence recaptured
bubbling to surface
journeyed destination
iridescent shimmering
once furrowed brow emotionless eyes
again burn passionate aflame
home to roost
her forever smile
said he
a stranger
in distant place
such pessimism
such negativity
will you live
life like so
ironic
never had he
seen her smile
never would
twitching seemingly
poised to crack
severe features
remain unexplored
another time
some other place
so radiant
blinding
essence recaptured
bubbling to surface
journeyed destination
iridescent shimmering
once furrowed brow emotionless eyes
again burn passionate aflame
home to roost
her forever smile
2 comments:
Very nicely worded. Amazing you could do that while having a conversation and based on the conversation itself! Nice piece of work this one. Be proud of yourself!! You do really need to get out there(get laid or something..haha) and of course keep the poems coming!
M.
p/s: notice nothing about the content of the poem here!
ahahah goes to prove women are multitaskers :)) and creative at that!
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